All Comments on 'Felicity Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
What a nice little story!

Thank you again.

fanfarefanfareabout 10 years ago
good writing

I like the craftsmanship jjjr is showing in these re-posted "Felicity" stories.

With clever revival of the often hackneyed and cliche riddled Lesbian and Incest genres.

ScottishTexanScottishTexanalmost 2 years ago

Sorry, but I could only give you a four for this one. You ended it too soon. You should have taken it to Helen having his dick inside of her making love to him. Then this time he finishes inside of her instead of outside. Helen decides that she is bisexual instead of lesbian. THEN you can end it.

That was not unlike premature ejaculation.

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