All Comments on 'Femborg'

This sci-fi story also includes a wide emotional range. This is a good read and very thought provoking re what is proper punishment.

You have syle, compassion, understanding, and a real talent for writing. Thank you. Ron

This is good story line and I hope you continue at least one or two more episodes. I'd like to see it go further where they work out some type of communication and do more as a couple too. Thanks

It makes me shudder to think she has to live like that. Anyway, nice story full of emotion. I like it.

Very good story line. Kept me intereted from start to finish. I'll be keeping up with this story. PLEASE, don't keep me waiting. ;-)

Great read looking forward to some more.

please add more detailed 1 just like the end of the story more interesting and not so rushed .

This is interesting, kinda makes me want the story to continue.

Yeony is going to be a full time job.

I liked it a lot. Having her come to like Jarvis was gratifying. The part where she bashes her head and cries and is taken care of by Jarvis tugged at my heartstrings. I would have liked to see some more from her perspective, but oh well.

My problems:

- Yeony's feelings were rushed

- The femborgs need an autopilot

- Story was too short

Very sweet. But absolutely horrifying at the same time.

Well written.