All Comments on 'Fever Ch. 02'

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Iread2relaxIread2relaxalmost 11 years ago
Olivia

This little girl is working my nerves. Momma needs old hickory. Great chapter, 5e74 stars.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Olivia

I like Olivia, usually in these stories, everyone is fawning over the nonhumans. She can't help that she's genetically predisposed to being a hunter.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Good,,but at times confusing,,keep up the good work,,,

mom wants to know what you want for dinner."

I shrugged my shoulders,((((( "I'm not really hungry."))))))))

She sighed, "You better pick something, because I really don't want to hear another one of her lectures. You know how she get when we tell her we are not hungry."

I rolled my eyes, already irritated. "Tell her what ever she decides is fine with me."

"Even if it's those ugly green peas?"

Another shrug of the shoulders stated my answer,((((( "Peas don't matter to me. I'm just hungry.")))))),,is he hungry or not,,,he cant make up his mind...its a decent story,,but at times a bit confusing,,,

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Olivia

I can't stand that child...

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