by McSlut
Only a truly emotionally challenged person could write such pathetic garbage.
Sez you! If you can't say something nice, don't say anything at all. After all, this IS the internet!
@Anonymous#1: Sorry you didn't like it, but I wouldn't say I'm "emotionally challenged" just horny and wierd. Also, what is "LW?"
@Anonymous#2: Thank, glad you liked it.
@mojorisin1967: sorry it was so short, hopefully my next will be longer, this one is just an experiment to see what people think of my writing
@Anonymous3: Not sure I agree with you. Literotica defines Loving Wives as "Married extra-marital fun: swinging, sharing & more." I definately feel that this is "sharing" rather than cockolding. Thanks for your feedback though.
This story started strong, with interesting implications, but quickly ended up as nothing more than a generic adventure into amateur erotica. Also, I feel like that 'Foot Fetish' tag is a bit generous.