by The_Darkness
this story was suppose to be about girl on girl so I ask, where is the sex/ I read your story I read nothing where any girl ate one another out. your story suck it had no heat no sex. whu did you even bother to write it.
Ignore them, I understand you are building up to it and your grammar is some of the best I have seen on tis site, please continue and ignore the people who try to bring you down.
pretty good, but a little more action would be nice. I hope the series gets continued because I really want to see the two of them get together.