All Comments on 'Final Breath Ch. 02'

Nice job. I would be great for a few more additions.

The way you ended the story feels like we need another chapter...love the story by the way

More chapters please

I absolutely love these characters

After a while 'I love you' loses its meaning when its repeated OVER and OVER like it was on the first page of this chapter, I got so sick of seeing it I gave up on this story. It was 'I love you' every other word it was sickening.

To the first four anonymous comments... thank you! There will be more chapters to this story... don't worry, I haven't forgotten about these characters! I don't know exactly when I'll have something ready but it will be as soon as I can.

As for the last anonymous person... your comment is absolutely laughable. Have you never been a teenager in love? Just no pleasing some people, I guess...

What really captivates me in this series is how Garrett and Erin become a couple. It's not just "the jock and the goth girl magically come together". It shows how they not only have to deal with differing social groups but overcoming misunderstandings on each others part. I like how this story doesn't ignore that conflict and I look forward to reading the next chapter.

Great story only suggestion that I have is the " I love you" .. Too much in my opinion but great sex amd great story.