All Comments on 'Finally'

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JBEdwardsJBEdwardsover 1 year ago

Great story. Except for the idiot that let shame destroy deflowering our heroine -- which means he was an idiot -- I can easily see the rest of the story happening. Regardless, and as usual with you, the story is well-written and entertaining. Five stars. ~~JB

sexymeupsexymeupover 1 year ago

rape anyway you look at it both guys forcing themselves on her. she was dumb as shit for letting the 2nd guy boss her around and let him have his way, she sould have reported both attempted rapes to her boss and the cops, one star. not into rape stories. should have posted this in nonconsent stories

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Turned me on!!

AshsonAshsonover 1 year agoAuthor

Dear Sexymeup,

It wasn't rape. She was prepared to fight Bob.

She was receptive to Roger.

She was safe at home with her parents but left with him, knowing his intentions.

He hadn't exactly been secret about them.

She was wanting this, ever since Mike screwed up.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Good little tale in the usual Ashson style. Odd the comment about rape - Ashson tales are most commonly a play on consent/non-consent, will I/won’t I, and this is no different. Perhaps it’s due to sexymeup being apparently formed entirely from a single sperm, making him unique.

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