All Comments on 'Finally'

I went over this one 3 times and still got a typo in there? Time for better glasses, I guess.

Oh well.

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and all of the miles, tears and blood, Homeward bound doesn't describe the feelings. TK U MLJ LV NV

You were right, it was more a biography than a story. What there was for a story was a really light. Don't know why you were cute about weed "brown cigarettes my dad warned me about" As humor it fell flat. So all in all, I didn't care for it. It might have been better as a flash story.

Still, it's nice to occasionally read about folks who don't mind their wives fucking around to satisfy their assorted fantasies. Sounds like something that's likely to be abused. Whatever toots their horn.

Can't believe any jerk would break up a scene like that. Even if it was kids. Takes all kinds.