All Comments on 'Finding Krissy'

so-so story not good not bad but it seems you left out something if the step brother was after her what will keep him from going after amy now it's fine for him to help kristen but someone needs to help amy to the setp brother and parents need to be put in jail

Good story. Time to sort out step brother and get Amy out of there.

John.

I thought it was a good tale and would like to see you continue it. Thanks for your submission.

I would love to see it be continued

Nice read and good feel. The author has a style he's working up and he could use some polish with spelling and punctuation, Still, it's a hot read ('course I like Daddy daughter stories almost as much as I love brother-sister stories). Keep 'em coming....

You need to save Amy and put that family in jail.

waste of time no incest and no finish plus another kid still in danger all equals A TOTAL WASTE OF TIME. DELETE AND EITHER DO IT PROPERLY OR STOP WRITING.

no incest = FAIL

no taboo = FAIL

no end = FAIL

still one child in danger = FAIL

seems you are a total FAILURE as a writer.

Very good story. Please finish it. They need to save Amy and destroy that foster family. Then Kristen, Amy and Max live happily ever after as a family.

Need more story..... what happens with Amy?

.......I don't suppose we're going to get a part 2 after all this time - are we ?

And that's a shame..........

Good story but, you must be dead or this would have been finished years ago