All Comments on 'Finding Love'

You drew your characters well. Very romantic with good sexual descriptions. You kept my interest throughout the story.

Moondrift I throughly enjoy your tales. This 'Finding Love' is no exception.

I thought you would have started Judith at 20 or 22 rather than 18. She would have to be a very fast worker at 18 to have her boss Garidner considering to leave his wife.

The ending was a bit rushed with several hanging ends.

When did Judith get a divorce? Who got court custody of the little girl? I know very little about the Austrailian law and divorce.

I am impressed with your descriptions of the sex scenes. Will read many more Moondrift Tales.

This story is loosely modeled on the andr_r_14456 story entitled "Wife's Mom" that was published here 17 months BEFORE this story.

I admit to liking both stories even though this version is not the original.

three year olds may be perceptive but are not smart in the way you portrayed that little girl

This has good writing in places and is quite rambling in the rest. Lots of loose ends and a rushed ending. Good sex though.

but it all came right in the end......judith was just a fuck slut whore and deserved nothing....especially deserting her daughter....what a skank......glad he got off with the MIL and even better getting her pregnant...now all three plus the one on the oven will be a very happy family.....took them a while to find each other and realise their love for each other....great stuff....

Five Stars!

loving wives story of SICK cheating by everyone. they are ALL SLUTS........

Entirely predictable from the first page.