All Comments on 'Finding Miss Perry'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
finding ms. perry

trusting the adventure continues between them and jenny tells her former student her fantasy of being a toy for a former student.

foolinaroundfoolinaroundover 13 years agoAuthor

The next chapter is in the works. Stay tuned.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
good read

I liked this story a lot. Something you may want to consider for next time too: if dialogue is separated from the rest of the paragraph, it would be an easier read (i.e. if dialogue wwas in a line by itself and not in the middle or end of a pragraph). Other than that, can't wait for the next!

tigereyes123tigereyes123over 13 years ago
wow

That was really amazing!!! Hope the next chapter comes soon...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago
beautifully written

There is a lot to like about Finding Miss Perry. It is beautifully written, it has interesting characters, a good plot, and a wonderful romantic atmosphere. Unfortunately, the promised second chapter never came, and the story remains unfinished.

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