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All Comments on 'Finding Peace After War'

by tristianc

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CajunBillCajunBillabout 12 years ago
Slow start

Nice start but too long. Plot has so many possibilities - a WAVE, maybe a virgin, wanting to lose it. In any case needs more chapters.

Bill

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