All Comments on 'Finding the Truth'

A Cruel Revenge Story (CRS). For me the gang bang with drugged woman is not my taste, but a happy ending epiloge compenzated this. My question remains If DG Hear can write wrong story??????

So all you guys think this was a just and fair reitribution. I guess I'm just a wimp ass cuck and all the other names you losers usually throw out because I think no one no matter what they did deserves to get drugged and gang raped. Those pesky morals of mine getting in the way again.

What about the fact that all of his friends were married to women he knew, guess that's just a minor thing if rapes ok in your screwed up mind.

I wonder if all you guys would screaming hell yea if we flipped this around and a cheated on wife got together 5 girlfriends with strap on's to fuck the cheaters ass bloody. Maybe you closet woman hating homo's would prefer him waking up covered in cum bleeding from his ass after the wife let him be queen for a night.

I just finished reading chocolate covered cherries and hometown hero and I'm very disappointed in DGhear with this one. It at best belonged in Nonconsent as it featured a rape.

Loved the slow build up and drama...then thoroughly enjoyed the extreme revenge...then the soft coda. Well written, well paced and well plotted. Thank you for entertaining me with your literary talents DG Hear.

Liked it. Revenge is sweet. She chose to cheat, not him. She conspired with his so called friend. She got off easy. Good Tale DG!! No wimp Zone! Need wimp cuckold catagory.

The "hero" should get about 20 some odd years to think about it.

If you are done with someone, just leave them, but crap like a rape is disgusting

I can't speak for everyone here. DG is a writer I respect and he seems to have a sense of morality. This is not something he normally writes and is a bit simple for his normal work.

Those other writers, I frequently don't comment on at all. One guy had a woman trapped in a cage in the desert. (Shakes head) As one of the writers here said: "How can you hold other people in contempt if you behave as contemptibly?" (paraphrase) She cheated. He was not exactly a moral beacon.

Technically, there is no doubt rape occurred. This is a FICTIONAL story. In this STORY, the only people clearly 'hurt' by this incident were Joan and Ray, and that 'hurt' was to screw up their future relationship. # Tough...they were both involved in callously and deliberately screwing up our protagonist's life! I think this is cleverly conceived FICTION (& the author COULD have arranged the timing and circumstances to leave her pregnant with a mixed-race bonus in this STORY!)! DGH did NOT advocate for gang-rape as a general act.

# balancing that 'hurt' we have three counts of satisfying long-term fantasies, plus a back-door bonus for hubby...heck, even a farewell shot for Ray! Excellent trade-off in my opinion!

5*

just don't like that - everything else was great. but it did put the lover in a bad light and i wonder if there was another way to do it.

Well written story with a solid premise.

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I'm somewhat surprised by some of the comments about the morality of using rape as a means for revenge. I don't want to sound like an apologist for rape because <strong>in REAL LIFE it is, in all cases, immoral.</strong> But I admit that the rape element in this story did not outrage me. Honestly I thought the scheme was quite elegant on many levels.

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I just find it interesting that I've read similar revenge stories on this site, where wives have been bred with dogs, left naked in an inner-city crack house, or surreptitiously sent to Latin American brothels with nary a comment on the morality of the revenge.

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Just an observation.

Normally, DGH's stories are not like that. I've read far better stories posted by him. Gang-rape is not a way to deal with a cheating wife!

I have three things to say

1) great story. DGH delivered again.

2) she got what she deserved

3) if you don't like fair retribution, fuck you

For a bad story from your pen. Maybe next time LOL!

The wife in this story earned and enjoyed her treatment on the card playing evening. Husband was correct - if she had simply asked for a divorce, he would have given her one.

" She was smiling/ thru her tears/ for 150 years ..." - Alex Harvey . That song actually got radio play 30 some years ago not likely today eh ? The story was pretty rote with nary a shred of novelty but it was amusing urban legend telling. 4****.

I read stories that have four star ratings because they usually are the best. This one, however, is just plain disgusting. How can anyone rate this four and five stars unless the readers are perverts that enjoy having a guy set up a gang rape of his wife. He deserves jail time instead of sympathy.

Well, at least I can say I found no technical problems with the writing.

Our hero arranged a gang rape of his wife. He screwed her after four other guys had her. He talked his friends into cheating on their wives. He secretly filmed them doing it. With friends like him, no one needs any enemies.

Story was ok , but the ending to me was weak .

I liked this story alot. Joan never really loved her husband. He was just a paycheck with a dick. The world is full of bitches just like her.

Hey..... another great story. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this one. The world is full of critics..... but who cares what they think. Please keep writing. Thank you.

While I appreciate the plan for a revenge that would forever poison the relationship between Ray and Joan (which seemed to be the central premise of the story), I just couldn't get over the fact that hubby had his wife gang-raped. I don't think killing or raping are ever acceptable methods of revenge against for cheating. Especially, as here, when it is so cold-blooded and the result of sober planning. It also stretched the bounds of credibility that the guys would all just go along with it.

The recordings actually should have made things easier for hubby-to hear that wife is in love with another man (rather than you) is easier in some ways than hearing that she loves you, but is betraying you for whatever reason-it gives you the closure you need to move on.

Well-written, and a clever idea to poison the love that has ruined your marriage, but I just couldn't get over the rape and the amount of suspension of disbelief required.

this was to short, you need to fuck the slut over some more. What gang rape Gravyrug, you can't rape a lying whore. She was just a little tired and besides her true love held open her legs and fucked her to. *****5 stars plus*****

Something different and very entertaining. Thanks for sharing.

You've done lots better, but this one is crap. The writing's too choppy, the characters are unsympathetic, and setting up a gang rape as revenge is just plain horrid.