All Comments on 'Fiona Ch. 01'

I liked it. I wish that you had gone a little further with the story before leaving me hanging, but....I guess that's just as much a testament to good writing as anything else. Thank you.

~Paul

very pleasant. Thank you, sir for a nice story. That's my perception of it. I could see the people and their actions. You write good pictures.

"I extricated myself from her and moved down her body. It was difficult because my hands were still tied behind me. I lifted her skirt with my head and kissed the injured ankle gently."

How, a short time before, had he been fondling her breasts?