- NonHuman
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Also, thank you for your comments whether kind, constructive, hilarious, threatening, or playful-yet-harboring-discomfiting-tensions-that-I've-yet-to-interpret. You might not believe me, but hearing from people keeps me writing and gives me a much needed pick me up in those dark, dark times. (those would be the two weeks at the end of the semester when my papers are due...and so are all my students' papers. That's not red ink kiddies, that's my life blood noting your use of logical fallacy. Naughty freshman! Bad!)
And last of all, thank you for voting, I appreciate that you thought enough of it to bother...it means a lot, and I really hope I made it worth your while.
Now part two:
I am so sorry.
really.
really really really.
So.
Sorry.
For the grammar, the spelling, the lameness of the first couple of chapters (in retrospect), any lack of variety, or staleness, or whatever.
But, mostly, for the wait. Seriously. I love you don't hate me. Forgiveness pleeeeze?
Now...back to the other two +stories I'm working on. Ha!
Thank you all and please, suggestions and comments always, always, always welcome. No, not just welcome, wanted, needed...loved. Awwwww.
Anyway,
Yours,
Enithermon. XX
PS. To those of you who threatened it, thank you for not hunting me down and tying me to a chair alla Misery. You know who you are. I <3 U 2.
- COMMENTS
ToriTheWandereralmost 2 years agoI know it's been more than ten years since you published this masterpiece, but I wanted to comment and say that I revisited it for a second time and it was just as amazing as I had recalled. Your descriptions, world building, characters, and erotic scenes are all so wonderfully done. Your story stands out to me as one of the few best vampire novellas on this site that I've had the pleasure of becoming immersed in.(and trust me when I say I've read a LOT here, both good and bad, practically to the point that I'm running out of stories and impatient with ones that don't show promise...)
Wherever it is you are now and what you're doing, I hope you've found a way to fulfill your passion of writing and that your creativity continues to entertain your daydreams <3
ChasingtheSkyalmost 5 years agoI very much enjoy your style of writing.
Your storyline was compelling, and I fell in love with these characters.
Anonymousalmost 7 years agoEnithermon.
I thank you for finding the time and inspiration to write such thrilling stories. They were and are so good that I can forgive the spelling mistakes. ( I have Aspergers, and little irritates me more!) I have spent several nights reading your stories, and they never fail to entertain. Frankly, I just wish they lasted longer, because I just can't forget the characters. But as a student myself, I know how hard it is to find time to... well, do anything. But thank you. I can't stop reading, even when I've already read them thrice.
XantuVoloalmost 7 years agoThis was an amazing story from beginning to end. And don't worry about the little mistakes as I'm sure we all knew exactly what you were saying. Hopefully I will get to read more of your stuff soon.
Anonymousalmost 8 years agoI can't count how many times I've reread this story and every time I am equally as captivated as the first time. Thank you for gifting this to us, thank you for leaving it up rather than removing it or not finishing this compelling story like so many others. I love this story - well written, consuming, passionate, great storyline, wonderful characters... Everything is awesome. 😊 Thank you!
Horseman68almost 8 years agoGreatly enjoyed this story by an excellent story teller, and I am not even a nonhuman fan. But, where did you go after 2012? Are you writing elsewhere?
ausvirgoabout 8 years agoIf this was your first story, I can barely wait til you mature as a writer.
Didn't notice any lameness, not even when Thea twisted her ankle :-) .
Great writing and not just "for a beginner"
You'd better keep publishing on literotica, or I might be tempted to get in touch with Jairus!
