All Comments on 'Fire in the Night Ch. 12'

How sweet!! What a nice story ending.

Thank's for the ending, or is it just the start of a new direction. Whatever, thank you.

NICE. GOOD SERIES. HATED THE CONDOM BITS THOUGH. ALWAYS DO!! ALWAYS WILL!! KNOCK HER UP!!!

I loved the story! I can't wait to read what comes next. I'm a little concerned though. The last bit with Shanna didn't seem appropriate for what had just happened. Is she going to turn out like her stepmom? I hope not.

The story ended leaving me curious as to what will happen next. Please continue it.

Whew!If only it could be ME!

This story was amazing! I absolutely loved everything about it. Please keep writing!

Absolutely fantastic story telling. I love happy endings or should I say continuations? Whatever! Excellent!!!

Having read this entire story, I must tell you that it totally delighted me. I note that you've not contributed since `09, so hope that all is well with you and that you'll return to write more tales.

Thank you for the enjoyment you provided.

Sincerely

-Wylde

I just finished reading the whole story, and oh my God, it was just great, and your details made me feel like I was there with them. Thank you so much, I hope you continue to write more amazing stories...

A wonderful story with good over evil and love conquering all. Look forward to more

about these two with the results of Shanna telling her parents finding out what

happened to Billy. Hope he gets what he is DUE.

Splitting the story in less chapters would have been nicer, but everything else was excellent, well done Sunnylynn ;)

Hope you'll return from retirement one of these days…

Great story I hope you come back and add more to it

What happed to Billy? I hope he spent the next 20 years sharing a cell with Bubba!!

Lot of make believe here. This doesn't all happen within 48 hours. Expecting way too much of your readership for a viable story that cannot fit within the timeline you provide.

Liked it very much. Appreciate your writings.