All Comments on 'Firestorm Ch. 03'

I can not wait to find out where this is going to lead to. You have a very intersting story line going and I can not wait to read more

Hope he gets his ass handed to him - Seraphim style!

Negotiating unbreakable vows, playing with lives like they were bugs...these are some very chilly beings. Micah will need everything she's got to save everything she is. I am surprised that the pack would let someone so special go into such danger.

Waiting with excitement for the next installment.

I so absolutely never saw that coming. I want to call you EVIL but instead must complement you on your story telling. This direction you are taking us looks to be one exciting ride!

That you have made our hero a bad guy and left our damsel in distress in real danger, do I really need to say I'll be waiting for the next chapter? NO! Instead I'm just going to say HURRY W/CHAPTER 4 hehe-he

yup,when he finds out that she's his soulmate,he's gonna kick himself....lol....love how this story is going

Caspian doesn't just need to eat humble pie for what he's doing, He needs to have a really big pie shoved down his throat for him to choke on. How could he be so dense?

OHHHH In the Classic song lyrics of Shaft

Issac: Caspian is one bad mother--

Ladies: Shut your mouth

Issac: I was only talking about Caspian

Ladies: Oh then we can dig it.

I love this chapter, and I love the twist and turns you have. I love Micah, and I hope you do something more with her Seraphim's heritage, and I also hope you do something with that black girl make her an interesting character. Did you have something in mind for her?

I wonder where this will turn. Very intense story line all of the sudden.

Do we really have to wait two weeks for the next chapter?

I kinda understand why he's doing this and its obvious that he's already having issues with his decision...but man oh man how is he going to fix what he's done especially when he finds out that he's her mate and her blood won't kill him :D

Looks like another great series. I'm anticipating the arrival of ch 4.

I just wish it had been longer can't wait for the next. He must realise she is his mate can't wait for the shock to hit him. LOL

i do think caz is in for a rather painful shock, i when push comes to shove ,micah is going to rip some new anal orifices in people

Great story Firestorm. It's very gripping and completely pulled my emotions in.... sadness, anger, worry... Keep going please!

the chapter seemed so short. 2 pages is fine but it passed super quickly. We're putting the puzzle together; piece by tiny agonizing piece. I'm still getting the characters and relationships straight but I'm enjoying learning about Micah.

I'm looking forward to more, especially more Micah and Caspian interaction. I hope it's a chapter we can really sink our teeth into.

Please do not wait so long to write the next chapter :) I absolutely love this story and can't get enough. It helps I find your writing style to be very enjoyable. Keep up the wonderful work on your writing.

Micah is not his to give, she's only a loan. Looks like he wants to start a war with the weres.

katgoddess1 is right, Micah is not his to 'give'. And considering how close she and Kiara are, he will be starting a war. Great story Fatality; I can't wait to see what happens next.

Please hurry.

I must admit, I'm a bit surprised. I thought that as a character who was smart and savvy, he would know better than to break that promise to the Prim Alpha. Wouldn't he be aware of how much trouble that would cause? As katgoddess said, he would be starting an enormous war, that wolf is the Prime Alpha of ALL the packs after all....

By the way, I sincerely hope you don't allow Micah to forgive Caspian too easily for this. For an offence that large, I hope she makes him beg on his knees and then some before forgiving him.

Daemon Black sounds like an ancient and formidable evil, if I am understanding his character. Caspian's cousin seems to be his eyes/ears to make sure that "the plan" goes as expected. Is Micha a sacrifice for a wrong done by her pack or a personal wrong done maybe by her or Dante????

Whatever it must be grave for Caspian to ignore the subtle mate hints that being noted or does he not know the mating signs???

Great story with great characters.

I think that the vampire healer and LIsa, the fledgling will be important support in the future for Micha.

vt

he's gonna regret those words sooo badly! and micah will have his ass for it...

Please !!! Please!!! Update and write more chapters!!!! Dear god heaven on earth!!! I'm on suspense as to what happens next!!! Also ... What is the other series you mention? I would love to read it!! :) thanks for the suspense and everything so far ... Can not wait for upcoming chapters!!!

it's such a nice story, please update!

Such a cliffhanger. Great characters and tension. Lot of potential for where this could go. Can't wait to read more!

Please update soon!!

This is a deliciously voluptuous tale. Please continue ASAP. Thank you for your efforts.

this story has started out just mesmerizingly awesome!!! You really need to finish this story out, PRETTY please!!!! Also, just as a courtesy, could you please update the posting of your chapters or just letting us know something?? It would be greatly appreciated. Thank you! :)

more please! Am feeling so gutted that he is going to do that to her! Should be an intesting twist when he figures out they are mates. I cant wait!

dammit! i swore i would never read an unfinished story ever again in Lit...it sucks when the author suddenly vanishes and leaves a story without ending...but i just couldn't resist if it has jazcullen's stamp of approval...i hope you post the prequel again and you finish this story too

i HATE unfinished stories!

(hint hint, FINISH IT QUICKLY!!)

I'm sure you must be tired of hearing this but it is an awesome story and I can't wait to read the prequel as well as the following chapters. Please post soon!

I just stumbled across Chapters 1-3 and ended up devouring them. I know you must have a busy life from the style of writing that you have but I hope to find more from you soon. I look forward to learning more about Caspian and Micah. They are very easily identified with. Somehow your style of writing has awakened the old teacher in me that has spent a lot of time being ignored. It was nice feeling excited by words again. Thank you and I hope all is well with you.

Thats what it feels like to have to wait for a story for months is cruel. Yeah we all get your probably going thru a writers block or drought call it whatever you want, but would it kill you to give us an update. Its bad enough you took away

BAD WEATHER (awesome story *hint hint* bring it back) then leave us hanging here forever.UPDATE PLEASE!!!

I see it's been almost a year and no activity what a pity. I would have loved to read Bad Weather and to see Firestorm finished. Ah well! Looks like another one bites the dust.

you can't end it like that....wth...lol

I wanna kick Caspian's ass right now!!

GRRRRRRRRR!

This story is amazing! I wish there was more!

Keep writing - as you truly have a gift :)