All Comments on 'First Date'

I thought that this story was very beautiful.

You have by far captured the true feel of the human body!

The story was exciting and wanting and I truly feel a must read for all. Thanks and continue with additional wrintings....you do very well.

A very sexy story, very well written. I could feel the heat between the characters. leaves you wondering about the future of the characters.

Thank you all for your kind words, I am currently working on a second story. Please continue to leave comments or send me feedback, it has been very helpful to me. Again, thank you all.

Great job! Well written, and very exciting!