All Comments on 'First Encounter'

by australwind

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Thank you

I'm sure that many a girl/girl affair has started much like this.

My own did.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
wonderful story

Just enough prelude to the fun part, and anticipation of more, cant wait to hear more of this duo? trio?

midwestyankeemidwestyankeeover 18 years ago
Delicious

What a delicious scene. You have an eye for interior details. I especially liked the easy friendship that you created between your two characters and the concern that Mary showed for the narrator's comfort and pleasure.

silverwhispersilverwhisperover 18 years ago
woo-hoo

good stuff, emotions sensitively handled, good eye for detail...nice work! :>

ed

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
I was minding my own biz ...

...and you had to get me all worked up, chickadee! ^5, fucking good one babe, and you know the tit-sucking took me there! more, please with a bit more "talk" ;)

Kitty

OzDaveOzDaveover 18 years ago
I was there

And I'm a male!. Tender, exciting, erotic. Well crafted and emotionally touching. Beautiful.

theweemantheweemanalmost 18 years ago
oh WOW!!!

AW

this is super ......sensual and erotic as if you were telling a true story..... were you???

laceyhall1204laceyhall1204about 17 years ago
WOW!!!

...that's all I can say.....

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