by lightsguydave
This was a very nice attempt at a first time story. Keep refining your writing skills and I project bigger and better things from you . . . smiles . . . angel.
story's a tad unimaginative, and i'm not sure a mutual sexual attraction equates to love, but it's not necessarily a bad story either i suppose..
I really enjoyed the story. It was well put together, no errors that I found whilst reading and of course, excellent for the heart rate. I like the setup, being a first time and a medical student to boot. There is lots of room to make this story grow into others.
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good, factual story. don't be afraid to try and be a little more open next time :D