All Comments on 'First Night on Caledonia'

Not just average BDSM, thoughtful, well-written and about the mind, not the genitals. Very good.

You clearly took your time to write this right. The story kept it's focus on its subject matter (male domination.) I can't wait to see where this story goes.

Sex is SO much better between willing, consenting EQUALS.

You made her give in way too easily. It's not plausible enough for a feminist virgin to act like that (so soon in this story). Especially the part about her begging for his seed. Teasing her, much more foreplay, and less rough for her first time would have been better.

A great story followed by a amazing plot and world, please keep going

Rape is not sexy.

At least you could have reverse the sexes. At least it would be different from 99% of the woman hating tripe on this site.

Hot AF!

Great writing style! Please keep writing.