All Comments on 'First Time'

That was a lovely story! The only issue I had was your use of urethra. I'm pretty sure that's not the anatomical part you intended, since the urethra is what is used to expel urine from the body.

I agree with the use of uretha, but it wasn't even detremental to this wonderful story.

I liked that you didn't used harsh words such as cock or pussy or whatever... Instead you described the scenario sensously and detailed, yet it was amazingly romantic! *sigh* Fantastic! I really enjoyed it! Proved that erotic literture doesn't necessarily need overly descriptive language!