All Comments on 'First Time Feeling Like a Slut'

You spin a very nice story, well paced and natural sounding, and interesting enough to keep me reading. I think you need to add a little dialog, though, to make it feel more "natural" rather than reading like someone's diary.

The fact that it was so easy to read without any dialog is a testament to your storytelling skill; work on your dialog and you will be a killer writer!

great first story. love the surprise of more men joining in on the fucking of you. great writing now you have started on with the next part of this story. or a new on.