All Comments on 'First time Watersports'

Loved it. More!

I would have taken a star off for the (lack of) editing and spelling errors, but the story got a six from me for hotness. I wish I had been him. I look forward to more of this.

Thanks for this story, very hot.

Oh my word! How I lasted through that without bursting is beyond me. What a hot, hot story! I was hoping he might let his cock soften a bit and let her have his golden glory right in her tight, little hole before pulling out. Maybe in chapter 2?..

That was a fun read. Thanks!

Such delicious events so well described. Please write the sequel soon!

it's so good to see a fellow piss story writer posting to Lit. keep up the good work!

Excellent, best story I've read here in a very long time! Five stars, keep it going please.