All Comments on 'First Weekend Together Alone'

by bittersweetcrush

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colonelstiffycolonelstiffyover 18 years ago
Good, but a Part 2???

It was pretty good and you should follow it up with a more sex-filled Saturday.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
LAME! LAME! LAME !!!

I thought they were gunna get it on analy with eachother..Not very descriptive and it ould have been alot better....

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Refreshingly honest

Why does HER story have to include someone ELSE's fantasies? After all, it belongs to Bittersweetcrush, and nobody else. I thought that your writing style was good and the story was honest and straightforward.

You go, girl ... and don't forget to write about your other fantasies and experiences as they happen!

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