All Comments on 'Fish Out Of Water Ch. 01'

Absolutely fantastic. Not only for the plot itself, but for the way it is written. One of the best writtens tories on this site.

Now you have got me hooked. Will you continue the story ?

This was planned to be at least a two part story, although the way I'm writing it could be more. Thank you for your feedback, it means the world to know that people are reading and liking it. Loves you all x

Both well written and extremely hot! This is a great example of what erotica can be. I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

Please finish this story. I'm dying to hear how the story ends.

Beautifully written and well worth the time to read the entire story. The emotions of Kate were wonderfully described. A joy to read

I loved how Kate's needs changed as she grew and developed. I long for her to find that happy medium between Her and who she was years ago. I want her to be happy. Thank you for writing a story that drew me in. JudyLee

gave it five stars...

can´t help wondering...

are the following excerpts typos, or are they malapropisms?

¨and nothing phased me¨. Phase is usually a noun, whereas to faze is usually a verb. Though homonyms, their meanings are not related, and their spellings cannot be interchanged. Both are common words, easy to look up.

Likewise,¨sense of purpose this man before me welded¨makes no sense. Is Max a welder? No, he wields, not welds, a sense of power.

Or,¨and lay prostate against her boots?" Prostate is a noun, part of the male genitourinary system. You mean prostrate.

¨She starred at me¨- the verb is ¨to stare¨. Starred is from Hollywood

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