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Click here"Mike already heard this, but you haven't," she began. "I want you to know that yesterday was the most fun I've ever had, and that you two are the best friends any girl could ever wish for."
"It was our pleasure," Sue responded, hugging her.
"Seriously," I added, "our pleasure." Mike grinned. Sue kissed Marybeth on the cheek, but Marybeth turned her head, and they kissed like lovers, and I remembered them, nude and caressing each other. Fucking hot. Then she turned to me, and Sue went to Mike, and I kissed his wife while he kissed mine. Marybeth felt like a long-time lover in my arms, snuggling into me, and we kissed long, and slow, and tender. Sue dragged us all into a group hug.
"Just for the record," she said as we held each other, "I'm not waiting till next year to do this again!"
THE END
THANKS FOR READING!
- COMMENTS
Stubbyoneover 6 years agoI read the 7-chapters in 3-sittings. I had to stop, occasionally to keep from having a heart attack. Wow! Was that ever a hot story. Absolutely one of the best so far out of the thousands I've read. The dialog was good and the variety was exciting. Nice to see friends get as close as that without jealousy and hurt feelings. Loved it. Easily a 5. Would love more similar stories. You're a terrific writer. Thanks.😊
irvlynover 9 years agoGlad to see you didn't leave too much out of the last one. Messy but conclusive!
Anonymousabout 11 years agohahahahahaha
You read a 7-part series that you didn't like? Really? You hated the characters, hated what they did, hated how the author framed the premise...and read seven chapters of it? And you write your comment as though you are addressing one of the characters! As though the fictional character will come alive and read your run-on sentences!
Also, the author should delete your comment for the threatened shooting reference. Having an asshole opinion is your right. Violence is not. Grow up.
Anonymousabout 11 years agoI think you and jason are about the worse couple I have ever read about, it is my opinion that no spouse should ever agree to any kind of swap without the spouse present and Sue you should be ashamed of your self for doing things with Mike unless you and Jason have already done it, the part of Mike licking your ass and the final thing of letting him fuck you in the ass without talking with Jason first and letting him fuck your ass first and Jason I think you are an asshole for not speaking up when Marybeth put all her stipulations on the table about no discussions and no questions about what happened between Mike and Sue when you wasn't present. Marybeth and Mike our Friendship would end forever and i would probably shoot you and Mike and would leave Sue. Swapping is suppose to be fun and in all cases open for anyone to ask questions and to say no to anything that they are not comfortable with whether for themselves or thier spouses.Your Story sucks!!!!!
PolyLvrabout 11 years agoIgnore the negative comments. You know you've written a good story when some of the slack-jawed troglodytes wish you personal harm.
Well written, engaging, and believable. I've been fortunate enough to engage in some of these activities so I know how easy it is to do things you wouldn't ordinarily think you're capable of.
Anonymousover 11 years agoOutstanding story. Well told and well written. I loved the fantasy. I want one of these women to be my wife and I want this couple to be our friends.
Anonymousover 11 years agoHi,I loved every bit of this "holiday" wish I could have been there. BB
