All Comments on 'Flashover Pt. 06'

Sean, Sean, Sean. You screwed up talking To the other developer. Reese said they used local contractors, and had been getting bids from them about the work. You should have gotten the names off those contractors, as one of them might have assumed that if Barn's project fell through the other one would go ahead. Sloppy police work.

Another exciting chapter!

5

Keeps getting better, as I anticipated it would. This is a very good series, and as teslaowner noted below, the lack of perfection is evident in places, which makes the story all the more believable and relatable. No one bats 1000! The Fish shooting adds the political awareness of how quickly any situation becomes racial or police instigated violence, and yes, it does happen, and there are bad cops out there, but there are also a lot of honourable police officers put in extremely hazardous situations with only seconds to make judgements. It’s what you reap for having a society with more handguns than citizens!

The story keeps getting better and better. I also appreciate the fact that the story is running daily, or almost daily. I hate long stories when the authors can't put the story out in a reasonable time. Kudos. I am eagerly awaiting the next installment!

The story still going strong so keep on keeping on!

Didn’t see cop shouting as happening. Thought a big drug bust would occur with a lot of product seized. One of the commenters had valid point about local contractors being pissed about losing chance for work.

*****Great read this action chapter really perked up the storyline. Good read thanks for sharing.