All Comments on 'Florida Cougar Ch. 01'

liked it...thanks

It will indeed be Debra going forward.

I was having a hard time choosing and apparently "split the difference" mistakenly.

and eagerly waiting the next installment. Great job, and my mind was too consumed with the hotness of the story to even catch the Debra/Brenda switch.

good start, Debra is a character with potential.

Better than expected

Debra or Brenda? A proof reader is required.64A5

som what is the woman's name debra or brenda Your changing names is very distracting.....

This is startinh out to be a great story.

Editing is so important...is it Mrs. Debra or Mrs. Brenda?

One of the sexiest things about this story is your superb vocabulary. You have great powers of description, and you also leave the possibility of actual vaginal sex dangling in the air in order to entice the reader and hold interest.

*****This is some great storytelling with some great sex. Thanks for sharing.

This is one well told but amazingly bizarre introduction. Your storytelling neatly transmits Connor’s persistent bewilderment: the verisimilitude "feels" real.

Interesting start.