by bogey102
OH my goodness, what a naughty little read this was! Very very nicely written! My b/f thinks it's too wordy, but he's a guy, and guys are dumb! lol...just kidding! Guys(in my experience/opinion)don't go for the wordy, descriptives, they prefer the wham bam...us ladies, however DO definitely enjoy a nice descriptive story to not only set the mood, but to transfer us to that fantasy world...which is EXACTLY what your story does! God damn..I am soaking wet, and wanting to find an Asian video store...like RIGHT NOW!!!!
Thank you for an excellent read, and for more than one excellent "O" my!!!!
_MauiGirl_
What can I say that hasn't been said already. I looked up the writer and was surprised to find that it was a male.NO!! No one can write like that and not be a female. I loved it. The story was so descriptive and erotic I could not stop reading. I will try to read the other stories soon.