All Comments on 'Flying Blind Ch. 01'

I had actualy just finished reading the rest of your work when this story was added to the list. Initialy I found the change of scene a bit odd, but halfway through page one I was totally imersed in it. A great piece of work, please hurry with chapter two!

It's so awesome to read something from you again!

i love a good read and this is one of the best reads ive had in a while apealed to my sense of humour i could almost see the caractors will be keeping an eye out for the next installment hope it is as good as this one

I have been waiting for your yearly update patiently and am happy it has finally arrived! Hope it will be a long one :) The first chapter hooked me in as usual. Looks like another interesting set of new characters. Thanks again for a great read.

Good to see you back. Bravo.

So happy you started your next series finally I've been watching for it, and its a great start.

Was wondering when you would brighten our days again. Always looking forward to your stories. Amazing as always.

I check several times a week in hopes you have something new. Can't wait to read this story!

Hey... glad to see you're back with some new stuff. I've read some of your other stories so many times that I've practically got them memorized *lol* I like where this one is going so far. I also find it amusing that Madison's best friend is named Billy ^_^

One oclock at night now, which means I will need to read the next part on a different day.

What a great story: sexy, smart, enticing.

Just yummi as hell.

Oh, yes, and the knee thing? Some people dont need to use thier fingers, licking the backside of the knee is enough without further stimulation. We're freaks, right? :)

I just love the hall of fame. So great to find new treasures

I just stayed up until 3.30am to finish reading your first chapter! this is ... I am lost for words ... I can't tell you how much i am looking foward to reading more !

slick writing, like butter. nice story, interesting characters. you have an amazing, natural writing style. thanks for sharing this and many gems of yours :)

To date, I've enjoyed every story you have written. So many others should read your work and think through how they should put a story together.

I read so many other people's stories where the idea is wonderful but the execution is flawed. Not something I ever feel about your work though.

I love this story and I found the perfect picture of Madison http://www.winkler-noah.it/184898/the-witness

I love the premise of your story and am wild about the execution. I will read the rest slowly and I hope to enjoy every minute. Very excellent job.

Dark Fantasy can be so easily done poorly, thankfully not the case here.

As a blind person who is a white cane user I endorse the authenticity of this chapter

djb

Another 5 star story installment.

My errata

He felt a claw nip her wing and it => this should be she felt

Sometime, he knew when it was tim => Sometimes not sometime

before you and Paul consummate => shouldn't this be peter ?

not to sure what =>too

"No, it isn't," Heda said, planting a food firmly in th => foot not food ?

What a tale ..... Your imagination must running over time ....... Fabulous and your style of ART is extraordinary

A wonderfully imaginative author.

Superbly written fantastic fantasy.

Wonderful imagination