All Comments on 'Flying Blind Ch. 02'

Great story and well paced - full of admiration.

Top author. Top well constructed tale. Five stars.

Tight gripping tale ..... Hard to stop for some work or other stuff ...... Fabulous

5 stars again... adding my errata

who 'shutting up' => should who be whole ?

but I don't his last name => don't know his

friend kick the garment a => kick should be kicked

Heda's arms seem make her feel safe =>seemed to make her

Never mess with master. => the master or a master ?

she could out of this little challenge,

You know if had just raked th

An anon that's a twatwaffle, they're so rare.

An ANON who thinks it can count.

"Still, that's . . . let's see, me, you, Kevin, Anthony, Joanna, Carla, Madison, Sasha, and Billy. That's ten."

That's nine.

no surprise... a great tale and fantastic writing. thank you!

Oh my god! You write banter better than anyone I've seen! I love it! Fantastic work!

I'm not sure if i said that the about first one too, but danm...

This is a frikin novel in its breadth, and i frikin love it!

This out of all your stories talks about first love and we all (I hope), and we all remember how special that was. I do.... Thank you for sharing always

Rich

The story is great, but the grammatical mistakes still abound even though it was proofread. Was the draft copy posted by mistake?

Do I have a problem if I'm staying up all hours reading what's essentially (being honest here) a fapfic, as if it were a novel?

I probably do, don't I? Oh well. I sure as hell don't intend to stop. This is GOOD.

Rhetorical question: Why is it that a piece of internet erotica is reading better than roughly half of the genre fiction that's currently on the shelf?

I'm enjoying this immensly. Both the suspense and the sex. And you fit them together so amazingly well.

Thanks for the experience.

Just got through this chapter, and it's still going strong. I'm looking at this as a birthday present that came a few days late *lol* As someone else said, the character development is quite strong... you've managed to create a thouroughly hateable character in Alvin. Can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter :)

Your character development always mesmerizes me. So Fleshed out its like I could be missing the characters right around me. Great Job as always.

One of my faves is back and man am I enjoying this story and it is only the second chapter. Can't wait to see where this goes.