by Evil Alpaca
I have taken up the habbit of checking your submissions every night in hopes of the newest wonderful chapter, and this one did not disapoint. Please keep going!
S.N.
I don't think your writing is pathetic at all. I really like reading your work. I look daily to see if you have a new chapter. Thank you for having a new chapter up one right after another.
Your work is fantastic. I can't wait to read any of your new stories and I love rereading your old ones. You write well enough to be published mainstream. More, more, more!
I skipped to the comment section after the beginning of this one.
Made me laugh out loud about the "Why i'm not a good daughter" discussion.
Blind? -Its fine.
Gay? -Also fine.
Borderline Psychotic? -Meet your sister.
Registered Democrat? -*Blink blink* We'll talk. xDD
That line was pretty much what I told my oldest daughter (42yrs) at her wedding last weekend. We are so much alike in our psyche yet she is a (gasp) democrat and I am a green republican. How we can love each other so much and have such radical differences of outlook on life is a true wonder :)
Great story but I'm really getting tired of Madison
Not evolving. She throws the same temper tantrum
Poor me every time and is distracting me from the flow of the story.
Thanks for writing these great stories for all of us:))
Ed
The entire story up until the end of this chapter is a month and half. Ain't nobody nowhere goin' to be gettin' over twenty years of abuse in that amount of time so put a sock in the 'evolving' complaint.
More than happy to read a series on literotica that has a story instead of paragraph after paragraph of endless sex
5 stars again..
My Errata
Benjamin lives there to," => too not to
could done for her.
Wow this gets intense spooky but extreme outstanding ....... This talent of yours is wonderful