All Comments on 'Follow the Rules'

i would definitely like to read the sequel to this story

I knew he couldn't be a total bad guy, please keep going

OH PLEASE MAKE A SEQUEL!!!!

I would love to read more about these two. Like Zachary meeting her? Or her finding/meeting him? lol Something gooooood :)

I would love to read a sequel to this. Please follow-up with this story and these characters.

MidnightLove123 - Of course you need to write the sequel! This is far too good a story to leave us hanging like this. Zach's a good guy, who did the best he could in the circumstances. These two need to have a good meeting "next time". Give us "next time" to enjoy! Damn good story. Thanks for sharing it.

Immediately, please!!!!

I'm going to die. Quite simply put. We need one. Desperately.

If blue ribbons were awarded to the best story of every thousand posted, this one would win, hands down, in a heart beat. This story is exceptional. Only those that deserve sequels should get them. This one demands one.

Yes! continue :D

Yes, Yes, please. Do a sequel as soon as possible

This.was.fantastic. Please do continue and write a sequel to this, we've got to know how things turn out. You did an amazing job.

That's well worth a sequel.

sequel, please!

I liked it!

sequel please! :) it would be greatly appreciated

You can't just leave it like that! I want to know more about Zachary the good guy. This is just a snack; I want the whole meal....

I have your page as my entrance to Lit so that I don't miss any of your stories. Was just finishing this one and thinking, "Damn, this author doesn't do sequels!!!" So, yes, sequel please.

Sequel please!

I can't wait for a sequel!

come on you can't stop now! this is very well done. grammar is great. plot is amazing. characters, are awesome... come on!!! please.

I would like to add that you take it slowly. The previous chapter was damage limitation. The rest doesn't need to be.

You absolutely have to do a sequel. You can't just leave us hanging with the way this story ends. This is actually one of my favorites. I kept searching to see if there were other chapters, but sadly, there weren't. I hope they are coming soon!

Good story well done

thanks

I have never left a comment on any of the stories I've read except this one! I really enjoyed it! A similar series, that is one of my favorites is titled Intense Love. Thanks again!!

you guys know this story is from a book called keep me safe by skye warren, right?

...google it and you'll see

Um...yes. I see MidnightLove123 is advertising her erotica under the name "skyewarren" on her own author page, and mentions "Keep Me Safe" by title.

The author could be offering a sample here free if people want to read the rest of the book or more of her work. I'd say they were one and the same. Do check something like that before accusing someone of plagiarism and libeling their good name and hard work out of knee-jerk ignorance.

Thank you.

you know if you write something that is not true! If an undercover agent commits a felony they do not get a "Get Out Of Jail Card". They go to jail