by petertowers
You have made this absolutely your own story with great pacing and some very interesting characters. You are getting your readers addicted to Maria as well as mother and son. And what a last sentence hook! Great job. I am so curious as to what Jean will be like. Thanks for writing.
well...the carefully preserved balance of the mom-son relationship has been broken...You have gone down a completely different path from either "A Simple Question" or "The Deal". I can see that it is a no-limits slam bang onwards. That's it for me. Thanks for the story so far.
It was a great co-story to "The Deal". You and litfan both do a great job. Would love to see a couple of more chapters in this story.
Left comenting until read all up to now. Can't fault it at all. What a well writen story , the surprises kept comming and I have to say so did the laughs .
We're all awaiting the arrival of Jean. When shall she arrive?
So this looks like the end?
I do hope this gets finished properly, it deserves to have a proper ending.
From the the resent dates of some of your publications I assume you're back from the void, it would be great to read more chapters of this story it really deserves more.
I enjoyed the story and I hope you continue this story. It is really hot!
You have done a great job, is there more in your tank for a chapter or 2