All Comments on 'Fondest Dreams Ch. 02'

This storyline has caught my attention because of the other stories that came before it. I'm not so sure about the dream walking aspect since everything is occurring on an alternate plane so to speak. I do hope that Zsalya finds happiness in whatever manner she can with her seeing all the bad things of the future.

I know it's a bit different. I'll be curious to see what you think once the whole plot is laid out. :)

And fixed! I cannot wait for more :)

The story appears to have gone up correctly this time! I can't wait to see the rest of it! I have to agree with Zsálya that Willi is very good at being scary. He is also very good at being her friend.

I'm involved - much to my surprise. You two - keep up the good work.