by Storytruth
ass, then Vacum up the nectar from everyone her yummy anus
from naked to anal sex, good up to that point. I luv being fucked in my ass, so I wish I could the husbad, and step from BJ jobs, to my ass fucked, to two cocks in her ass, thn mine of course
This was one of the worst stories I have ever read on here. You should feel bad for posting this.
it was short and I like that.. but it was too easy and not real. I mean a little more detail, and a maybe she should have not been so willing..
Pretty terrible story, not really believable nor appealing.
....a bunch of average Americans, booze and football? I think this has the makings of a true story.
Well, not as much mispeling in this story (deliberate misspelling). But poor construction.
You know this is an erotica site. You can say fuck and not F__k.
Come on over, watch a little football, drink some beer, eat some snacks,fuck my wife.
Now how could anyone turn down an offer like that?
Better yet, fuck watching football, lets just fuck your wife.
Good story, Thanks
you made it into the top ten worst stories also top ten idiot writer, congrats.
I gave up after the first few paragraphs. No wife in the world could be that stupid.
the Ct. Yankee
That is, it's very sketchy, lacks dialogue, and isn't very realistic. Besides that, it belongs in the Group Sex category.
In addition, one team fails to "scope." Did you proofread at all?
As I mentioned in another comment, this reads like a treatment to be given to a writer.
This has all the eroticism of reading a grocery shopping list. anon jerry