All Comments on 'Football Season'

by xLoupNoirx

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Wonderful as a gay romance!

Why can't it be a gay romance? I thought the story was great all the way. I can imagine Logan and Brier going even further than their tentative kiss. How about hair on the chests for both guys? I'm looking forward to subsequent chapters! I do feel sorry for poor Chad, however. But I have the feeling that Logan and Brier belong together, running their hands over naked bodies, tracing hair patterns in their chests, feeling the throbbing cocks, tasting the lips and kissing skin -- please bring it on!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
More please!

What a lovely story! Is there more to come?? Please say yes!

xLoupNoirxxLoupNoirxalmost 10 years agoAuthor
Author's Response

First thank you to all the readers and voters. It really means a lot. Second, to any inquiries about the story yes there will be more to come. :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
LOVE IT

IM IN LOVE WITH STORY!!! PLEASE WRITE MORE! I love it!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Hope we get more!

Really enjoyed this story and would love to hear what happens next!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago

UNFINSHED STORY DONT WASTE YOUR TIME READING IT .

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Oh there will be more for Briar and Logan for sure! They seem to have lit the fire right here. No wonder Briar smiled all the way home! I'll bet there was a strong dream that night form both men as well!

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