All Comments on 'For Services Rendered'

very good for your first story, i saw a few spelling errors, and grammar, but being a teacher that is normal. story plot was very good and i enjoyed it very much and was very excited while reading it. hope that you will continue writing, look forward to reading more stories. thank you.

Great story, one most of us have dreamed of! Can't wait to read more!

Has been mentioned in the New Story Reviews thread on the Lit forum (Author's Hangout).

Please continue. This is one of the best first efforts I have read

One of the best stories I have ever read on literotica. I hope there is a second part.

It's always good to trade even steven.

Boyd

Great start keep it going!

Keep it coming!

John, I saw you in one of the chat rooms and immediately read your story. Great work!! I can't wait to read the next installment. (I agree with the "teacher" above that aside from a few minor errors, it's well done.)

A really good first time effort,just a tiny bit rushed.

Keep up the good work. Luv Jenny Cook

every geek's dream! good read, too bad there aren't more chapters to cover the rest of the weekend.

Please like dial it back like a notch on the like number of likes Jennie uses in like her conversation.

Like thanks.

1) The story ended too soon. I like 5 star stories to keep on.

2) No follow-up parts 2, 3 etc.

Paul in Oklahoma

Oh my, Jennie sounds like a hot little slut.

Thanks for sharing.