by girlthatlovesgayguys
Thank you so much for emailing all your feedback everyone...I'm in the process of writing the second chapter ..with Brindalyn and maybe a little watersports...give me some feedback on how you guys think that sounds :)
the best thing i can say is, it made me rock hard and my cum is still all over my chest.
its me...the auther of this story...I am now listed under the name waterbaby87 becuase something got screwed up with my password...i will be writing more stories soon
It was a good story and quite hot, but I think you need a new editor. It's straight not strait. That is one of my pet peeves and it almost messed up the story for me.
Loved this story and thought it was incredible hot.
I hope you are still planning to publish the next chapter, even though it's been a long time cuming. Thank you!