All Comments on 'Forbidden'

Another sad fantasy, poorly told

Very poor story! Not alot of background information .the hymen is on the outside of the virgina not the inside!

It is getting down right bad on here - you get 01 good story out of 20 and the rest are of big monster boobs and 10" dicks.! I got as far in this one to where he put his first 5" in and then the other 5" in her.! Yes we all have 10 to 12" (DICKS) on here and thats all we want to read about*! WRONG. Get real people.

To "Very Poor": It is spelled vagina, not virgina and, yes, the hymen is inside. The clitoris is on the outside. This is basic stuff.

ZERO! Read the 1st 3 paragraphs, more like a comedy! Please don't write dude!

I like how careful and gentle the father atleast attempts to be with his young daughter and also how much love they share for one another. It could use more background and detail

You think the hymen is five inches in do you? Kind of gives away your age and inexperience. Come back when you're eighteen and have had some real sexual experience with someone other than your own hand.

Gave her five and then later the other five Lol. ... Hey who among us can't relate?

rushed, to say the least... One night he recollects her mom, and jacks off, thinking about his baby girl, and the next night, he jumps her bones, because she had wished it would've been dad that asked her out... Nothing leading up to her attraction to him? Too fast to even be a fantasy.