All Comments on 'Forbidden Ch. 04'

I just found this series and was very impressed.

I am disappointed that it is not continued past chapter 4.

Please continue it.

Dawn,

What a terrific compilation of coherent psychological stories. I enjoyed reading the Bens and Bwandyl minds through you pens. There was a lot of suspense. Nice to read a series that was well written.

This series is incredibly well written, although I have to admit you left me guessing if the last chapter was the end or not. A simply "The end" would be nice or perhaps you're looking to expand on this story in the future? One can only hope so!

I am a male who has just had a similar experience with a married and younger women. I was struck how you brought out the pain, the excruciating pain and lonliness that Ben and I feel. Your story was an excellant depiction of how painful it is to have so much love for a person and no way to show it. Thank you for an outstanding job.

Thank you for the kind comments. I'm glad it touched you all, and to Anonymous, whom I cannot respond to except here, I am glad you see your feelings reflected in their story. It means I'm doing my job well.

I plan to submit a new chapter withing the next fortnight, so please come back and read the latest events in Ben's and Bronwyn's lives.

I'm breathlessly looking out for pt. 5!

of the tangled emotional web of an overwhelming passion that can only end with the destruction of the two people scorched by its heat. I see her still at times and the intensity of the feelings shake me to the core. Your excellent writings capture all the feelings involved. Thank you for sharing your talent with us.

An unbelievably realistic story of passion and guilt. I understand the feelings only too well and I certainly look forward to parts 5+.

What a painfully large void remains in Ben's chest as I too have experienced. He has lost twice: the wife who still is alive in his heart and Bronlyn, who he wishes to add. As much a story of new love, it is more like a real event ascribed to "losses".

Collectively, "Forbidden" is another example of excellent craftsmanship by a one of the best of the best modern day writers, not just at Literotica but of all writers. Congratulations DawnJ!

We are still awaiting the rest of 'Forbidden'...it has been over 4 years

cliffhangers...pity such a jewel has been left unfinished...*moue*