All Comments on 'Forbidden Fantasies'

A lot of the little details came together to make it "believable". Some of the asides about his sisters were distracting, but not badly so. Keep up the good work!

I'd like to read some more of him fucking his cousin. Did he fuck his sisters? Thanks for the good story.....Rich

Some of your text contradicted itself - Point at the very beginning says she's dumb, then it says She gets straight As.

This story is completely relate-able I completely lust after my cousin of whom secretly lusts after me....he is always textin me things he fantasizes about doing with me.... he has even went to the extent of him wanting to squirt his baby making cream into my waiting cunt time after time after time until I am carrying his child...

i rememba making out wit my cuz when we were 5 and i want those times back so bad. she's mad thick now.

Naughty HouseKeeper, you're a little FREAK aren't you?? Have you ever done anything with your cousin?

And A_17... You'll have to tell me more! You've got me interested now!

I used to have some fun times when I was younger, but you'll have to Email me for those stories! - And while I'm on the subject, EVERYONE EMAIL ME! I love hearing from my readers! AND LOVE MEETING THEM TOO!

Don't expect someone who is well friended and has people surrounding him to understand neglect and lonliness. But I guess I am a freak to a point. And I guess you'll never know if we did anything...

way to rushed this should have been spread over months not one night. there also was not enough background and very little character development.

Story didn't make sense when he indicated that Angela was dumb but then said she was a smart student.

I gave 4 stars although that was a little bit generous.

Oseeker, thanks for taking the time to read my story, I'm sorry I didn't deserve 4 stars in your eyes, I appreciate your time and energy in reading, and hopefully you can get past the mistakes and read more of my work! This was written Years ago and I haven't gone over any of my work since Posting it, so again, I hope you'll forgive me! Meant for entertainment purposes only!