All Comments on 'Forbidden Fruits'

your story has been mentioned in the New Story Review Thread in the Author's Hangout on the bulletin boards.

How fun, I love it.

Enjoyed the story up until the end. I thought it ended too abruptly and would liked to have seen what happened after dinner and the movie.

Wow, another great story!

I really like your stuff Luckie Duck. I think your a great writer and hope you keep at it.

Look forward to hearing more...