All Comments on 'Forbidden Love'

by kranosic

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Anonymousalmost 13 years ago

Eh , rushed . Take more time to build up the story & characters .

Anonymousalmost 13 years ago

hhhmmm

I agree, a little fast. And being FWB (friends with benefits) is not "falling in love". Two separate things.

trysexychocolate almost 13 years ago

Anonymousover 11 years ago

Loved

I want more. It should be like a little installment type thing. This would just be the beginning. The next would be more sex and a little bit of drama mixed like one of them seeing someone else with the other being obscenely jealous. PLEASE WRITE MORE TO THIS!!!! PLEASE!

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