by ladylynx428
I didn't realize at the beginning that the girl was doing fantasy, but I figured it quickly. Decent beginning for a story, very quick to the sex. I'll like seeing how this story develops.
RS
This story forbidden lust should have got more in my voting but i can only give you 5 as that the top mark . reading this very hot horny story so very exciting .
loved it from the start to finish. wishing there was more to read . now i want more parts of this very pure sexy story. so please do write more and very soon .
Unrealistic and uninteresting. Descriptions of sex are pretty boring unless you build up arousal first. Develop your characters, build sexual tension, and then the sex will be really exciting.
I enjoyed reading your story. Sometimes I wonder why the dad has to go from describing his daughter in more or less a loving way; to face fucking her hard and calling her a slut and then back to gentle loving dad at the end. Don't get me wrong, I love the progression of the story, just the Jekyll and Hyde on the part of the dad. Seeing your daughter masturbate an all would be a dream come true. It would definitely be a turn on. I'd love being the stepdad to Anonymous who added her comment.
omg!!! one of the best.... i want to fuck my daddys cock sooo bad but my mom stays at home alot. just imagining ifit were my dad and me made me cum.... good job
I love how this story is sets a vision. I wish my daddy would fuck me but I wouldn't know how to get him to fuck me
Although it was too quick and not drawn out like I would have liked, it did match my fantasies when I was younger, To be honest, I still have them. I masturbated many nights in my bed hoping my dad would catch me and fuck me hard! I did see him looking at me a few times when I bent over so he would see my tits or ass exposed but he never did anything. I wished and still wish I could be his little slut but I doubt if it will ever happen. A girl can dream though.