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All Comments on 'Forbidden Lust'

by Addictive55

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Enjoyed it hugely!

I really enjoyed reading it. It's good to have you back, Addictive! Richard

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
With two you get egg roll

Not too bad, but "wonton desire" in paragragh 14 gave me the giggles. Does it come with egg rolls?

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Very spontaneous

Also very hot. Good job!

Dom_bq

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Nice opening. Now write another five or six chapters and you just might have a very nice story. Good luck and keep going with this.

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