by GasPedalJoe
loved this story. makes me want to become a real estate agent ;)lana
I'm in mortgaging - thinking of giving it up for the other side of the business - give us more. Rates may be rising, but my temperature is going up much faster........... Lusty Redhead
The sex part of the story was really hot but took way too long to get to!
I was once in real estate, i had a few encounters in my time but none as hot as that!... if only... if ... only...
Well written and very erotic. The "reluctance" part turning into pleasure is a very nice transition unlike a lot of stories that go that route in a quick and somewhat unrealistic manner. It certianly has me all wet. No, I don't think it needs to "get to the point" faster. The build up and character back story is part of the charm.
i really enjoyed the slow build of this story,since i'm a detail nut.when we got to the sex it felt wam-bam,but by the ending i could see these two having a relationship.as in your other reluctance story,your couple communicate with each other during/after the sex.you did a really nice job with this story.gem
I loved the story but he should have made her clean his dick with her mouth after the ass fuck and then get hard and do her again right then.