All Comments on 'Forced Sale'

by GasPedalJoe

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
good story

loved this story. makes me want to become a real estate agent ;)lana

Lusty RedheadLusty Redheadover 19 years ago
MORE

I'm in mortgaging - thinking of giving it up for the other side of the business - give us more. Rates may be rising, but my temperature is going up much faster........... Lusty Redhead

opelsopelsalmost 19 years ago
a bit long

The sex part of the story was really hot but took way too long to get to!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
excellent

I was once in real estate, i had a few encounters in my time but none as hot as that!... if only... if ... only...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
wow

mmm made me want to get a real estate license

ladycassladycassalmost 17 years ago
Excellent

Well written and very erotic. The "reluctance" part turning into pleasure is a very nice transition unlike a lot of stories that go that route in a quick and somewhat unrealistic manner. It certianly has me all wet. No, I don't think it needs to "get to the point" faster. The build up and character back story is part of the charm.

gem28gem28over 15 years ago
what a man...

i really enjoyed the slow build of this story,since i'm a detail nut.when we got to the sex it felt wam-bam,but by the ending i could see these two having a relationship.as in your other reluctance story,your couple communicate with each other during/after the sex.you did a really nice job with this story.gem

cowbullscowbullsover 10 years ago

I loved the story but he should have made her clean his dick with her mouth after the ass fuck and then get hard and do her again right then.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Thank you!

Incredible story! Thank you very much.

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