All Comments on 'Forced to Take My Mother'

Yes good mom for son, with daddy's ????

This is a great story, but it need a continuations. The story can evolve so much more with dad involved. I hope you can continue this story and give it a real ending.

That was Developed SO GREAT as I suspected it was DAD all along but now we get to see if Son will take it out on Mom's pussy and be daring to push her to almost like expose herself and him in front of Dad.. Cuckold him as revenge, or fuck her ass as he already ate his son's cum from her pussy.. Or tie Dad up and invite his buddies over to gangbang her while she is blindfolded but dad has to watch from a video feed in the next room. Or the Son takes her to a Swingers Club and shares her with others and then brings her home to Dad with Multiple loads in her.. Dad is going to be lucky to do a DP with Son as the boy already knows the story... Or maybe Son decides to go to local college and stay home while Dad is at work and wear Mom's pussy out so it is too tired for Dad when he comes home.. You really do well in making it believably HOT as details are just enough to keep wanting to hear more.. Look forward to sequel

Great job, but you said it was for the April Fools day contest, so I had a clue.

Thanks for sharing.

I don't agree with the humiliation and debasement some of your readers are suggesting, no gangbangs. Keep it loving and fun between the 3 of them.

A very wierd way for the parents to show their "love", imo it was more about their lust and kinks, than about their "love" for him, he is going to be scared for life after this, so it was rape allright.

hot as hell

Great story. Well written. Knows the craft! Passionate and respectfully kinky.

Loved reading it even a second time! Lucky boy as the next chapter would be a threesome with mom and dad or even if Dad was to go bi would be even wilder

God story. I would like to read a follow-up story as to how the son handles the situation how that he realizes he was set up. It would be interesting to read about the son's psychological aspect of the set up.

I read this several years ago and enjoyed it. Came across it today and was even better. Thank you 5*

Well...it's true you detailed and described about everything imaginable about Rachel and her son, Mark; in fact, it was the detailed description of the dad which gave away he was the intruder (from how Mark described him when he was staring over the fence) and from the dialogue only he was privy to and could have been the only one anyway. It was also obvious Rachel dressed like that to seduce Mark, so that was a giveaway. Obviously you excel at detail and it showed. I certainly thank you for taking your time as you did. Only thing I would say is to find a way to obfuscate who it could possibly be if you compose a similar story, as the voice box (and Mark commenting that in his head) was the added detail that spilled the beans and made it all obvious--although I'll say the real twist was that it was the dad which had the "mom" fantasy.

I read this story a while ago, and always wanted a follow up that picks up soon after and how he'd react to his parents putting him through a traumatic event to trick him into screwing his mom.

Fantastic work ... please go on...

Great story! Read it twice now. One of my favorites!

This is my favorite story on the site. I visited it again today. It's been a couple years. I wish I could give it 10 stars. So I gave it 5.

While totally erotic, there was little doubt regarding the identity of Glen. To my way of thinking, mom would have gotten what she wanted without resorting to such a plot. Anyway, good job, author.

Nice

10/10 story. I just wished there was a follow up to this.

So what's next

Good story between mum and son. But sent me in to blind rage at how patents betrayed him abd further intend to manipulate him. I could see son cutting times moving out, killing , suicide or someone in jail

This was the first erotic story I ever read. You opened me up to a new world. Who would've thought that written stories will be better than porn. Thank you.

One of the best of this type of stories I have ever read

Extremely well written and vert erotic!

Love the story but always wanted a continuation where the son is horrified by what his parents did and goes out and goes to therapy, finds a girl and loves the rest of his life normal, never mentioning the "break-in" again and rarely interacts with his parents again or pretends like it never happened or that he doesn't remember after "accidentally" hitting his head at some event, depriving them of the satisfaction of their perversion. I'm sorry but as hot the sex was, that was an incredibly cruel thing to do to their kid.

The next morning they come down and find their son gone. When they check his room, his clothes are gone. Later that day the police come and arrest them both.

The judge puts them in jail for several years, and grants the son a huge amount in damages, forcing them to sell the house and both work 3 jobs to make money to pay him.

He finds a loving wife, has a few kids, and his parents never get to see their grandkids because of the restraining order against them...

Son was too much of a milqtoast. Should have made dad a cuckold. You NEVER share your mother or your sister

The title 'Forced to take mother' attracted and was fulfilled as the title. Well expected to have some twist and it was and not bad. Obviously the fiction/imagination of parents drama to seduce the son for taboo/forbidden affair could have been better. I believe the fact that a loving son of a loving family irrespective of having adolescent crazy affair on his mom can enjoy his mom under gun point; well some what good to note that it was planned as ice breaking and parents have planned to keep the secrets and not revealing the entire fact to their son seems good. Well all other part of the story is pretty good, deserve the applause 👏

5 stars. Fairly obvious who Glen was from thr start. Needs another chapter where Mark gets some sort of revenge

I wish there were more chapters, the end was a little crazy, wat did the son do after he found out , we need more.

I have to be honest I didn't really like this one it didn't speak of the bond between the mother and son that should have been there it was speaking in a controlling and using situation the dad controlled it and both his mom and dad pretty much just used him the bond wasn't there during the sex scenes and that hurt it this was definitely not 1 of your better stories

Ha! Crazy twisted fun! Your detailed descriptions are amazing!!!!

Are you saying that the next chapter is already written? This one was good and allowed the desires of everyone to emerge. You need to get a proofreader to correct your many mistakes.

Glen was no mystery after a few paragraphs. But I didn't like the fact that a father, who is supposed to be the backbone of a family, cooking up this madcap scheme. And you have not made it clear what prompted him to do it, unless he was probably the world's biggest crazy pervert.

Weird and disjointed

I think most of us suspected it was the father.

Needed a finish when son confronted them

Five stars anyway