All Comments on 'Forced to Take My Mother'

I think most of us suspected it was the father.

Needed a finish when son confronted them

Five stars anyway

Weird and disjointed

Glen was no mystery after a few paragraphs. But I didn't like the fact that a father, who is supposed to be the backbone of a family, cooking up this madcap scheme. And you have not made it clear what prompted him to do it, unless he was probably the world's biggest crazy pervert.

Are you saying that the next chapter is already written? This one was good and allowed the desires of everyone to emerge. You need to get a proofreader to correct your many mistakes.

Ha! Crazy twisted fun! Your detailed descriptions are amazing!!!!

I have to be honest I didn't really like this one it didn't speak of the bond between the mother and son that should have been there it was speaking in a controlling and using situation the dad controlled it and both his mom and dad pretty much just used him the bond wasn't there during the sex scenes and that hurt it this was definitely not 1 of your better stories

I wish there were more chapters, the end was a little crazy, wat did the son do after he found out , we need more.

5 stars. Fairly obvious who Glen was from thr start. Needs another chapter where Mark gets some sort of revenge

The title 'Forced to take mother' attracted and was fulfilled as the title. Well expected to have some twist and it was and not bad. Obviously the fiction/imagination of parents drama to seduce the son for taboo/forbidden affair could have been better. I believe the fact that a loving son of a loving family irrespective of having adolescent crazy affair on his mom can enjoy his mom under gun point; well some what good to note that it was planned as ice breaking and parents have planned to keep the secrets and not revealing the entire fact to their son seems good. Well all other part of the story is pretty good, deserve the applause 👏

Son was too much of a milqtoast. Should have made dad a cuckold. You NEVER share your mother or your sister

The next morning they come down and find their son gone. When they check his room, his clothes are gone. Later that day the police come and arrest them both.

The judge puts them in jail for several years, and grants the son a huge amount in damages, forcing them to sell the house and both work 3 jobs to make money to pay him.

He finds a loving wife, has a few kids, and his parents never get to see their grandkids because of the restraining order against them...

Love the story but always wanted a continuation where the son is horrified by what his parents did and goes out and goes to therapy, finds a girl and loves the rest of his life normal, never mentioning the "break-in" again and rarely interacts with his parents again or pretends like it never happened or that he doesn't remember after "accidentally" hitting his head at some event, depriving them of the satisfaction of their perversion. I'm sorry but as hot the sex was, that was an incredibly cruel thing to do to their kid.

Extremely well written and vert erotic!

One of the best of this type of stories I have ever read

This was the first erotic story I ever read. You opened me up to a new world. Who would've thought that written stories will be better than porn. Thank you.

Good story between mum and son. But sent me in to blind rage at how patents betrayed him abd further intend to manipulate him. I could see son cutting times moving out, killing , suicide or someone in jail

So what's next

10/10 story. I just wished there was a follow up to this.

Nice

While totally erotic, there was little doubt regarding the identity of Glen. To my way of thinking, mom would have gotten what she wanted without resorting to such a plot. Anyway, good job, author.

This is my favorite story on the site. I visited it again today. It's been a couple years. I wish I could give it 10 stars. So I gave it 5.

Great story! Read it twice now. One of my favorites!

Fantastic work ... please go on...

I read this story a while ago, and always wanted a follow up that picks up soon after and how he'd react to his parents putting him through a traumatic event to trick him into screwing his mom.

Well...it's true you detailed and described about everything imaginable about Rachel and her son, Mark; in fact, it was the detailed description of the dad which gave away he was the intruder (from how Mark described him when he was staring over the fence) and from the dialogue only he was privy to and could have been the only one anyway. It was also obvious Rachel dressed like that to seduce Mark, so that was a giveaway. Obviously you excel at detail and it showed. I certainly thank you for taking your time as you did. Only thing I would say is to find a way to obfuscate who it could possibly be if you compose a similar story, as the voice box (and Mark commenting that in his head) was the added detail that spilled the beans and made it all obvious--although I'll say the real twist was that it was the dad which had the "mom" fantasy.

I read this several years ago and enjoyed it. Came across it today and was even better. Thank you 5*

God story. I would like to read a follow-up story as to how the son handles the situation how that he realizes he was set up. It would be interesting to read about the son's psychological aspect of the set up.

Loved reading it even a second time! Lucky boy as the next chapter would be a threesome with mom and dad or even if Dad was to go bi would be even wilder

Great story. Well written. Knows the craft! Passionate and respectfully kinky.

hot as hell

A very wierd way for the parents to show their "love", imo it was more about their lust and kinks, than about their "love" for him, he is going to be scared for life after this, so it was rape allright.

I don't agree with the humiliation and debasement some of your readers are suggesting, no gangbangs. Keep it loving and fun between the 3 of them.

Great job, but you said it was for the April Fools day contest, so I had a clue.

Thanks for sharing.

That was Developed SO GREAT as I suspected it was DAD all along but now we get to see if Son will take it out on Mom's pussy and be daring to push her to almost like expose herself and him in front of Dad.. Cuckold him as revenge, or fuck her ass as he already ate his son's cum from her pussy.. Or tie Dad up and invite his buddies over to gangbang her while she is blindfolded but dad has to watch from a video feed in the next room. Or the Son takes her to a Swingers Club and shares her with others and then brings her home to Dad with Multiple loads in her.. Dad is going to be lucky to do a DP with Son as the boy already knows the story... Or maybe Son decides to go to local college and stay home while Dad is at work and wear Mom's pussy out so it is too tired for Dad when he comes home.. You really do well in making it believably HOT as details are just enough to keep wanting to hear more.. Look forward to sequel

This is a great story, but it need a continuations. The story can evolve so much more with dad involved. I hope you can continue this story and give it a real ending.

Yes good mom for son, with daddy's ????

This is one of my favorite stories and I have been reading this site for over a decade. I finally signed up site this year.

This was so hot but man the ending ruined it for me! I felt bad for him at the end because yes he did want his mom but he knew it was wrong. He's gonna need a lot of psychological help in the future. Poor boy. I still classify this as rape because even though he willingly fucked his mom and enjoyed it I don't think he would have done it if a gun wasn't pointed at his head. The could get sent to prison for that shit for probably 10 years.

That was a great story. I would love to read a sequel. Maybe how Mark and his mother talk the next morning. She explaining everything and then his father comes in and they all discuss it and everyone is okay with it after Rachel says to her son that last night after "Glen" left the two of them made love before his father came home. Joe goes on a few business trips and while he is gone Mark has sex with his mother and even sleeps in his parents bed with his mom. Then on s Friday or Saturday evening they are playing a game having a few drinks and Rachel gets up goes and changes, well takes off everything and puts on a black rob and comes back to the dining room and says "hey boys, how about we play a different game" at which point she drops the rob and is standing there nude. They all end up in the parents bedroom with Rachel getting dp'd. Joe and Mark take turns fucking her pussy and ass, making Rachel cum over and over and over. Just a thought. Love your writing.

Easily one of my top five favorite stories. Hope to read a sequel!

But a little too long.

I loved this story. Doesn’t matter that I figured it out too. Very hot fantasy!

After being used by the two people he loves more than anything...possibly, for him, suicidal thoughts or actions? And no consequences for the users? All for the satisfaction of a sick fantasy? Lovecraft, I really like your stories, but this one went too far over the line. wow

You truly are a gifted writer, I have been reading a lot of your stories and they are remarkable good and very well done.

Hot fucking story man! Jerked off hard on that one.

Great story, I loved every word of it. Figured out Glen was Dad pretty quick and still loved it. Love all your stories so far. Good stories and excellent writing.

thank you i found it really hot. though i figured Glen was his dad fairly quickly. enjoyed it much thank you again.

I must concur with Ambivalence 03/03/15's comments.

J

"Author's Note: See? Not non consent; after all you can't rape the willing!"

Bullshit!

The kid was RAPED by his parents. "Glen" with his gun and with his mother already primed constitute coerced rape. He resisted as long as he could, and acted out of fear for the consequences for his mother. A noble endeavor, but totally wasted on her.

I have enjoyed several of your stories, but I had to force myself to continue reading this one after I recognized what your plot entailed. I kept hoping the kid would grow a set of balls and attack "Glen" but of course that would have taken the story line in a wildly different direction.

I will be very careful about reading any further stories you write, assuming I can bear to read any of them. I am gravely disappointed with this one.

Awesome take of how I wanted to take Mom. Forced to do so, but on the down low it was my idea. Would still like to do so, even with her being 70.

Many of us have wanted our moms to fuck us. It was a hot story, and he pounded her willing cunt. I can't wait for another where dad and mark spit-roast mom.

near the end it sounded like you weir planning on writing a pat 2 to the story its like it ended at a cliffhanger

super hot, thanks for writing.

is a fucking skank slut. ANY man that would share his wife has NO true love for her. wow what a whore! i wouldn't fuck that slut for anything...

Loved it got me hard as a rock keep up the good work

ignore the haters, this was a great piece of fiction

thank you for your writing.

What a rubbish tale!

If i had found out I had been played like that, i would have left a note saying "Hope you and Glen are happy together. I am gone and never want to see either of you lying rapists again. Be real glad I don't own a gun."

See the title!

The kid should of walked in and raised hell instead of craving on the floor with what was done to him

I had a sneky feeling that Glen was really dad, yet some how I figured it was one of the son's friends, like the next door neighbors that was watching mom in the pool, when the son got home. Son was wanting to have sex with mom but didn't really know it as of yet, till told to do so thinking one of them would be hurt or shot, if he didn't do what mom and (Glen) dad, wanted. The only thing that really wasn't real clear for me, is on how the son really felt after hearing his mom and dad at the end there.

- Wasn't hard to figure that Glen was really Dad,right from the beginning.

- A really HOT story until the final page.Went from a somewhat happy ending with Mom and Mark "making love",to the kid overhearing that he was used in his parents perverted fantasy,and they were setting up a future threesome.Talk about someone who'll be on the therapist's couch for years to come!

- (Wonder if Dad wants to fuck Mark in the ass,and Maom is looking to dress Mark up as the daughter she never had. Hey,it could happen with those parental pervs!)

I was sleeping when I felt someone get into my bed, it was my mom. Now that I knew the incident had been planned, I decided I'd go with it. I felt my mother's naked body move nest to me. I could feel her breast against my arm, and her nipple was hard. I instantly became hard as I heard my mom's heavy breathing next to me. I moved on top of her and pressed my lips to hers. Our lips parted as out tongues entered each others mouths. Mom's tits were smashed against my chest as I moved my cock to her pussy lips. We kept our kiss going as my cockhead parted her wet lips, and pushed my cock inside the woman of my desires. Our lips parted a few inches, my hands reached up holding her shoulders. I started giving her short hard strokes, each causing her groan with pleasure. I began to pick up speed, but continued thrusting hard into her pussy. Mom began to constantly moan as I eagerly continued pounding into her. My mother's breathing became ragged, gasping at times, as her body started to quiver beneath me. As her orgasm hit she began calling out my name, "Oh Mark, oh god Mark, keep fucking me baby!" When she said that, you could hear out skin smacking, and I began ejaculating against the back of mom's pussy. In ecstasy, I began my vocal release, "Oh mom, you are so hot, I love fucking you!" Uh, uh, uh, uh, yeeeeeeeessssss!" Mom's orgasm continued her climax as my semen continued bursting inside her. "Oh Mark, oh honey, oh yes, oh god Mark, oh god, oh god, fill my pussy with your cum!" I didn't stop until every drop in my balls was inside my mother.

I have enjoyed most of your work a lot. You broke me with this one. I'll not read any more of yours.

Non-consent is exactly that and that is exactly what this is. He is being threatened with a weapon, he believes she is being threatened, how does that add up to consent on his part? This was simply a case of perverted RAPE. I'm disappointed in you.

I gave it a 2 because it was well-written and deserved acknowledgement of your writing skills. But I only gave it a two because of the content.

I loved this story you have such amazing works would this one have a sequel or anything like that

I loved this story man 5*

I guess I'm a sicko for loving this, but if so is my destiny I shall gladly be one

Great work, man. Truly one of the best, sexiest, and truly enjoyable stories on this website! I applaud your skill.

What it comes down to is a sick betrayal. Using the son, threatening him. Thinking something violent would happen to himself or that his mother would be raped at gunpoint. Fun twist? No. Sick. And the way they were talking about it afterwards.. Just sick, disturbed people. Zero stars.

I have read most of your stuff and have really enjoyed most of it very much. But after reading this I left thinking what a sick, disgusting fuck you must be. But I guess I'm a fool for a good romance along with the incest. This was actually pretty damn disturbing to think that a mother and father would do this to their son. I'm pretty turned off by the whole thing. Too bad to, in the beginning I was into the fantasy of having a MILF like her to play with. Win some and lose some I guess, and this was definitely in the loss column.

Though I have read your other m/s stories and liked them, I just could not like this new story at all. Imo the son was Mentally Raped here. Yeah, the sex scenario was fine and all. But still didnt like the ending. Feeling sorry for the son. There are many other stories here on Lit about parents seducing their sons, but they seem to be better than this.

You should write a sequel to this and I suggest the parents are punished for their deeds and then go for family reconciliation leading to a happy ending with a threesome or whatever!!

Your story was good, but it was very similar to one posted a few days before it by an author named midwestmomlvr. Good work though. I love mother/son incest stories.

I just finished reading Bound For My Father and had a curious thought. Could this "Mark" be the one Keri got into trouble over with her potential sorority sisters? Because imagine what Laurie would think....

Was a great 5 star story until the ending spoiled it. Disappointed.

Great, sexy story; the kid was a bit of a pussy though 😆

Good story. Next chapter son grows a pair and teaches parents a lesson not to screw with some ones heart. Needs to hide out for a rew days or possibly go to Grandmothers (Fathers Mother) and spill the beans.

I saw it coming from a mile away. I wish you would continue these hot stories though.

Maybe I read a different story somehow, but the son had a hard on every time he saw his mother and couldn't stop whacking off to her. Had he never had a desire for his mother your accusations of rape would have merit.

Instead she gave him everything he dreamed of. Yes, that was a twisted ploy on the part of the parents to get it to happen and for the father to watch, but if this kid was raped I want to know where I can sign up to be "abused" like that. Go check out that pit called non consent if you want to see rape.

I have been a fan of yours for a long time now, but the ending to this story actually made me sick to my stomach. You took what seemed like a loving story and turned it into a fucking sick rape tale. You need to either take this story down or try to salvage your dignity as an author and fix this piece of garbage. You really disappointed me on this one. I hope the mother dies of some kind of std or gets arrested for incest rape.

WOW I liked that! 5*'s In reality I wouldn't touch that bitch whore with a ten foot pole! She is probably fucking every dog in the area and has more STD's than a pig in heat! LOL!!!

Horrible ending! Change it please!

what a fucking set up . total rubish8D92

This was a 5+ story until I got to your contrived ending, which nearly ruined it for me. Sorry, but I had hoped for something better at the end.

Rape is rape

The manipulation is wrong!

This was a really well written story and the consensual part was sweet in a way but the ending made it go from sweet to messed up. I give it a 3.5/5 instead of a 5/5 just because of the ending.

Too many unanswered questions . Now he knows it was a setup what does he do about it ??? There's so many ways you can got with this story BUT you need to finish it. 5 stars AND don't keep us waiting.........

Your stories are starting to take on a repetitive, rinse, wash, repeat cycle. Same old story lines time and time again. Decent quality of writing but it sure gets boring reading the same old stuff time and again. You're better than this.

A nicely written story with an unusual plot twist, hot sex and good characterizations. That is bound to be a sure-fire contest winner. I gave it a five star rating for a job well done. Do keep up the good work!

Well, what happens next??? Now the son knows but what is he going to do about it?!?!?! Pleeeeeeeeeese write a sequel!!!!!!!

Would have been better if the dad didn't know about it. Still good though.

Need to continue, does he continue or does he confront his parents ?

Love your work.EC

It appears that Literotica has taken down the account by the scumbag who stole your story as his/her own. When you search the system for the author Babarbara, they're not there. Just fyi.

Very well written and exciting story!

I hope you make it into a series and continue with the great foundation you started.

I hope this story also inspires other moms to dress sexy for their sons, just like this mom tried! I bet they will have a much easier time ;)

Naughtydad469

Excelllent plot build up. Son's reluctance kept it entertaining. Not the typical wham bam thank you mom story. Even though the ending was no surprise, you knew it was his Dad all the time, it was still enjoyable. Sequel, please!

Another literotica member: babarbara

Has used this story as his/her own story.

Just thought I'd let you know!

if the son had not agreed, "Glen" could have stepped in and let the uber reluctant son see what he was missing.

silly git, he doesn't recognise when it right in front of his face.

missed your writing!!

Good job! I felt kinda bad for the dad at first lol. I was like "man that's fucked up he's working more so this punk can go to college & he pays him back by fucking his wife." Lol I loved the twist honestly I should've seen it coming. I loved it!!!

Totally called the dad being glen

Good story for the most part. However, I would have enjoyed it all a lot more if the burglar was real. I was distracted for most of that part of the story by knowing it was his dad, which just gave it a weird perv vibe. However, the interplay between mother and son was great, and when I ignored who the burglar was it was even better.

Like the other comments, the twist was obvious, besides which, how likely is it he wouldn't recognise his own dad's voice?